Commas

[Goldenboy25]

Do you think the commas are placed correctly below?

It is with great regret that we announcence the passing of Mr. Bongo Conteh, who was the elder brother of Mr. Peter Conteh, in Freetown a few days ago.

 

[The Newt]

I would take out "who was" and fix the typo, but the commas are fine.

It is with great regret that we announce the passing of Mr. Bongo Conteh, the elder brother of Mr. Peter Conteh, in Freetown a few days ago.