Comparison of Sentences in Terms of Clarity

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Alexander2

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Are the sentences below equally understandable? Or does the first sentence sound unnatural and difficult to grasp?

“It will be shown that from the first century onward, the Christian usage of the word parousia has always been with the meaning “coming” when reference is made to Jesus’ action at the final judgment.”

“It will be shown that from the first century onward, Christians have always been using the word parousia with the meaning “coming” when they are speaking of Jesus’ action at the final judgment.”
 
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