I wrote:
The system automatically contacts AAA Security which is triggered by sound or motion.
The system automatically contacts AAA Security, triggered by sound or motion.
Can I replace "which is" with a comma since we're referring to the same Subject "The system"?
My original thought was:
The system automatically contacts AAA Security. It is triggered by sound or motion.
Thanks.
BT
The system automatically contacts AAA Security which is triggered by sound or motion.
The system automatically contacts AAA Security, triggered by sound or motion.
Can I replace "which is" with a comma since we're referring to the same Subject "The system"?
My original thought was:
The system automatically contacts AAA Security. It is triggered by sound or motion.
Thanks.
BT