correct use of span (v./gerund)

Ardy

Member
Iran-Farsi
Hi dear forum members!
I wanted to make sure about the correct use of span(v.) in the following sentence/phrase:
...with over 7 years of proven track record of attaining over-goal performance in delivering high top notch digital products and services spanning Consumer Electronics, Telecom, Transport and Logistics, Foods & Commodity, FMCG, Financial & Commercial Services & Insurance.

thank you for your help
 
  • The Newt

    Senior Member
    English - US
    The grammar is fine, but I'm not wild about "spanning." Perhaps "ranging over [the fields of] consumer electronics etc." And there's no reason to capitalize the items that follow.
     
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