Courage utterly opposes the bold hope .....

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littepuppy1

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Courage utterly opposes the bold hope that this is such fine stuff the work needs it, or the world. Courage, exhausted, stands on bare reality: this writing weakens the work. You must demolish the work and start over. < --- > It will be a miracle if you can save some of the paragraphs, no matter how excellent in themselves or hard-won.

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Here,' courage utterly... Start over';

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