creating a feeling of inclusion and belonging

[KMRipple]

Hello!
Would "creare una sensazione di inclusione e appartenenza" be a good translation for "creating a feeling of inclusion and belonging"?
Whole sentence in English is: "I want to take a minute to let you know just how much I appreciate your display of creating a feeling of inclusion and belonging".
My attempt in Italian: "Voglio prendermi un momento per farti sapere quanto apprezzo la tua dimostrazione di creare una sensazione di inclusione e appartenenza".
Thanks in advance for your guidance.

 

[Starless74]

Would "creare una sensazione di inclusione e appartenenza" be a good translation for "creating a feeling of inclusion and belonging"?

Yes, it would.
The problem is with "dimostrazione di creare una sensazione" which definitely sounds odd.
I would suggest: ...farti sapere quanto apprezzo il tuo saper creare... etc.

 

[KMRipple]

Yes, it would.
The problem is with "dimostrazione di creare una sensazione" which definitely sounds odd.
I would suggest: ...farti sapere quanto apprezzo il tuo saper creare... etc.

Thank you! That does sound so much nicer!

 

[rrose17]

TBH your display of creating a feeling sounds equally odd in English.

 

[KMRipple]

Hi rrose17! Totally agree with you on the English. Appreciate your comment.