Dear Clare....

[emma1968]

Ciao
Please, could you check this for me?

Hi clare,
Long time passed since we wrote each other but even more time passed since we have seen.
I know you always are so busy with your job that sometimes I would like to write you but I hesitate because of the fear bisturbing you.
By the way, how is your new job? And how are your children?
Last time we met Simon he said us that probably this summer you would like to come in Italy for a couple of days. Are you planning that? Would be fantastic see you again. Simon said me either that you stopped your Italian lessons. Such a shame!!!!! However I would be very happy to give you some.
Waiting your news.
Lots of love .....



Thanks

 

[You little ripper!]

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[emma1968]

Emma, most of those changes I made were to make it flow a little better, not because they were incorrect.

Thank you!!!