Dedicated to earning clients trust

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Nouchka

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Rome (Italy)
French (France)
Hello everybody,

Sorry for bothering. I only would like a confirmation: Did an English native person write the sentence below? In my opinion, it wasn't, but perhaps I am wrong and I only don't understand what it means. Thanks a lot. :)

"Dedicated to earning clients trust through local expertise, consistent delivery a passion for performance"
 
    • It is hard to tell. It looks like the sort of thing you might see on the side of a company van. A collection of useless business phrases which mean next to nothing.
    Dedicated to earning clients trust through local expertise" "consistent delivery" "a passion for performance"
     
    Nouchka said:
    "Dedicated to earning clients' trust through local expertise, consistent delivery, a passion for performance"
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    It may have been written by a native speaker who was sloppy about punctuation. It sounds like an
    advertising slogan for a service business. Such slogans often depart from standard language forms.
     
    It is a slogan presented in only one sentence. Thanks to you, I understand now what happened.
    Actually, I have to translate their website from English into French. I am not fluent in English (sorry :eek::eek:) and in their text, some sentences (a lot!) do not sound "English". For one of them, I asked to a friend of mine, who is American, and she confirmed that the sentence was awfull. According to what you tell me, I think that the company probably asked to a native speaker to write the text, but probably they modified the text AFTER.
    I do not know exactly what happened, but it is tiring to translate a text which is not correctly written.

    Thank you! :) (and apologize for MY English)
     
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