Deep into cloudy trails along the way

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Is "Deep into cloudy trails" working in English?

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Context: It is a poem describing a hike or trip at springtime. The line "Deep into cloudy trails along the way" tends to depict the trails in the hills are surrounded by clouds. The poem is titled "A Hill Trip."

Enjoy the vernal lights playing about many a hill.
Why go home because it's going to drizzle?
Deep into cloudy trails along the way,
Your clothes get wet as well - even at a sunny day.

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I've searched "cloudy trails": The images pop up like what I want:

 
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