Developed businesses...

Discussion in 'English Only' started by Amazonico, May 18, 2006.

  1. Amazonico

    Amazonico Member

    Toronto - Canada
    Español - Venezuela
    Could you help me with the next paragraph please? It is correct?

    - Developed businesses in new countries, selecting appropriately and high potential dealers or distributors, and collaborating with their progression and sales success through a permanent advise and continue support.

    This paragraph is part of my resume.

    Thanks in advance for your collaborations.
     
  2. cuchuflete

    cuchuflete Senior Member

    Maine, EEUU
    EEUU-inglés
    Hi Amazónico,

    I assume this is part of a list of accomplishments.

    -Developed business (note, not plural...I assume you mean you developed business activity, and not entirely distinct business enterprises.) in other countries, selecting high-potential dealers and distributors. I provided continuing support and advice, contributing to their sales success.
     
  3. Amazonico

    Amazonico Member

    Toronto - Canada
    Español - Venezuela
    Thank you Cuchuflete. Now, It sounds better.

    Amazonico
     

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