document is invalid with any alteration

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sophiasophie

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Hi, can I rephrase the sentence "this document is invalid if altered" as "this document is invalid with any alteration"?
 
  • Cagey

    post mod (English Only / Latin)
    English - US
    Your revision is awkward. I wouldn't use it, though it is possible to understand the intended meaning.

    You could say:
    Any alteration <makes/renders> this document invalid.
    Any alteration invalidates this document.
     
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