Educate

namlan

Banned
Vietnam
- We want to educate my children well and build up a happy family.

- Did I use the right phrase here "educate.........happy family"?

Thanks a lot!

NamLan
 
  • Cathy Rose

    Senior Member
    United States English
    "We want a good education for my children and we want to build a happy family" may be a clearer expression of your intent. The word up is not needed. One other suggestion is that if the children belong to both people, as is suggested by the word "we," you might want to say, "We want a good education for our children..."
     
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