English to Urdu Translation

[razakazmii]

Hello,

Can somebody please translate the urdu verses into English:

دیکھو میں بنجارا ہوں،
مرضی کا دھارا ہوں،
بجھتی ہوئ بستی میں گھومتا آوارہ ہوں

My English translation is below:

Look! I'm seemingly a nomad who is driven by free will; making me a lone wanderer in extinguished town.

 

[Qureshpor]

Look, I am a pedlar of grain
Am my own impulse's train
In this decaying settlement
I wonder from lane to lane

 

[razakazmii]

Look, I am a pedlar of grain
Am my own impulse's train
In this decaying settlement
I wonder from lane to lane

Beautiful translation

 

[Qureshpor]

Beautiful translation

Thank you. It would probably be better to change "impule's train" to "impulses' train" as you need a series of impulses/desires to form a stream/train.

 

[Alfaaz]

I wonder from lane to lane

یہاں شاید wonder - "ونڈر" کی جگہ wander - "وانڈر" لکھنا زیادہ مناسب ہوتا (جیسے رِضاء کاظِمی صاحب نے آغاز میں تحریر کیا تھا)...؟​

 

[Qureshpor]

یہاں شاید wonder - "ونڈر" کی جگہ wander - "وانڈر" لکھنا زیادہ مناسب ہوتا (جیسے رِضاء کاظِمی صاحب نے آغاز میں تحریر کیا تھا)...؟​

شاید زیادہ مناسب نہیں بلکہ ایسا ہی لکھنا درست ہے۔ شکریہ الفاظ صاحب۔

 

[Qureshpor]

I shall re-write my original version.

Look, I am a pedlar of grain
Am my own impulses' train
In this decaying settlement
I wander from lane to lane

 

[elroy]

Also, “peddler.”

 

[Qureshpor]

Also, “peddler.”

Not for the Queen's English that I speak! It would be acceptable across the Atlantic.

 

[elroy]