Enoncé complexe

athew

Member
French
His loose mouth hung vacantly and his skin glistened with sweat.

My try: Sa bouche relâchée qui pendait bêtement et sa peau brillait de transpiration.

It doesn't sound good at all...
What do you suggest?

thank you
 
  • Nicklondon

    Senior Member
    UK English+Frenchy French
    Sa bouche molle pendait bêtement et sa peau reluisait de sueur. Still not entirely satisfied but best I can do at 11.30PM.
     
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