extend my sincere gratitude to all

Discussion in 'English Only' started by shinke98, Dec 19, 2006.

  1. shinke98 Member

    Republic of Korea

    I wanted to know whether the following sentence makes sense.

    Could you proofread it?

    "I also would like to extend my sincere gratitude to all the professors in my undergraduate course who motivated me to study International Relations more."

    Thank you very much.:)
  2. B.B.James Member

    Dorset, England

    Not much wrong here. Personally, I would switch the position of 'also' and 'would', and because it sounds like speech I would place a comma before 'who' to give the speaker time to draw breath! :)

    But neither correction is absolutely necessary, the sentence seems ok to me without them.

  3. Tayllc

    Tayllc Senior Member

    USA, CA
    USA English
    Sounds good! I might just change the last part to: who encouraged me to further delve into International Relations.

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