faire naître un signe

[Cleare]

Hi,

again doubts about translation. How would it be better to say in the context (it's a kind of prayer):

Aujourd'hui j'ai pleine conscience de toi, au travers de tes pas, j'ouvrirai ma voie, je percevrai chaque signe que tu feras naître et parlerai de toi pour que tu survives.

I translated:

Today I am aware of you through your steps, I will pave a way, I will comprehend every sign which you will give rise and I will speak about you to survive.

Thanks in advance!

 

[Gerak]

Hi there, nice to meet

Hi,

again doubts about translation. How would it be better to say in the context (it's a kind of prayer):

Aujourd'hui j'ai pleine conscience de toi, au travers de tes pas, j'ouvrirai ma voie, je percevrai chaque signe que tu feras naître et parlerai de toi pour que tu survives.

I translated:

Today I am aware of you through your steps, I will pave a way, I will comprehend every sign which you will give rise and I will speak about you to survive.

Thanks in advance!

Perfectly correct
With a detail that it is "give rise to"

 

[Kelly B]

...I will be aware of receive? every sign you bring forth...

 

[Cleare]

Hi there, nice to meet



Perfectly correct
With a detail that it is "give rise to"

..., I will comprehend to every sign which you will give rise, ...

O'K?

 

[Kelly B]

No - ...to which...

 

[Gerak]

To is attached to give rise, not to comprehend
So "Every sign which you'll give rise to, [next contain]"

 

[Cleare]

...I will be aware of receive? every sign you bring forth...

Thank you, Kelly!
The person who prays receives signs, but he wants to understand them correctly.

 

[Cleare]

No - ...to which...

Yes, sure!

 

[Bolinoche]

Today I am aware of you through your steps, I will pave a way, I will perceive every sign to which you will give rise and I will speak about you to survive.

The last part of your sentence convey the meaning that it is you who will survive, but in the french version, it says that you will talk about him to keep him alive.

 

[Cleare]

Today I am aware of you through your steps, I will pave a way, I will perceive every sign to which you will give rise and I will speak about you to survive.

The last part of your sentence convey the meaning that it is you who will survive, but in the french version, it says that you will talk about him to keep him alive.

Thank you Boinoche! It helps!