fear the fall of the branch

Abyss21515

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Swedish
Would this sentence be grammatically correct? <——-Question from original thread title added to post by moderator (Florentia52 )——->

The bird doesn't fear the fall of the branch she lands on because what she relies on isn't the branch, rather her own wings.
 
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  • velisarius

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    British English (Sussex)
    Considering the title, I'm led to believe that the question is about the phrase "fears the fall of the branch".

    I'd say it's "all right"; it sounds rather more poetic than "fears that the branch she lands on will fall", but I'm not too keen on it. I fear the fall of a branch that is going to land on my head/I fear that the branch I'm on will fall. :)
     
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