Feedback on the following concerns

Parergon

Senior Member
Italiano, Italia
I would like to get your feedback on the following concerns.

Is it possible (logically meaningful and correct?) to ask for a FEEDBACK on a CONCERN? I wonder whether this formula flows or not.

Thanks.


* By concern, here, I mean a specific worry about a technical aspect (e.g. the structure of) of the work (e.g. an essay) I have been working on.
 
  • TheAmzngTwinWndr

    Senior Member
    United States
    No, yours is fine, mine just sounds a bit more idiomatic to me, but maybe to someone else yours sounds better.

    Actually, I just thought of this, you could say "I would like to get your feedback on the following concerns of mine"
    -That's probably the best way, it sounds normal to me and its closest to your original structure.

    Ciao :)
     
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