first time I'd seen him smile in years

[viajero_canjeado]

大家好，

有一首蠻感人的歌，名為 "He stopped loving her today". 歌詞有一行是稱：I went to see him just today / Oh but I didn't see no tears / All dressed up to go away / First time I'd seen him smile in years.

最後那一句該怎麼翻成中文呢？ 我能想出的都是比較拗口的說法 = =
「隔了好幾年才看到他重新在微笑。」
「過了好幾年才終於看到他又在微笑。」

不然哩？謝謝～

 

[kareno999]

大家好，

有一首蠻感人的歌，名為 "He stopped loving her today". 歌詞有一行是稱：I went to see him just today / Oh but I didn't see no tears / All dressed up to go away / First time I'd seen him smile in years.

最後那一句該怎麼翻成中文呢？ 我能想出的都是比較拗口的說法 = =
「隔了好幾年才看到他重新在微笑。」
「過了好幾年才終於看到他又在微笑。」

不然哩？謝謝～

看到他久违的微笑

 

[SuperXW]

幾年間第一次看到他笑
or more 文藝一點：多年以後再次見到他的笑容 something like this...
又看到他露出微笑/ 看到他久違的笑容……等等。