fool around with fireworks

l3376876

Banned
Chinese, Taiwan
Some people fool around with fireworks; they let fireworks shoot out in all directons.

First, does this sentence make sense to you? If not, how would you say it?

Thanks.

Love,

Lewis
 
  • savannah

    Senior Member
    English, USA
    Some people fool around with fireworks; they let fireworks shoot out in all directons.

    First, does this sentence make sense to you? If not, how would you say it?

    Thanks.

    Love,

    Lewis
    The first part of the sentence sounds fine. The second sounds a bit awkward to me. Perhaps it'd be better to say "they set off fireworks in all directions."
     
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