...from July to September, during which period/when...

lokasseyve

Senior Member
Mandarin
Hi,
Summer vacation is from July to September, during which period the weather is usually hot and wet.

I made this sentence and wonder if the underlined part is correct. Or should I use "when" instead?

Thank you so much.
 
  • owlman5

    Senior Member
    English-US
    I don't think "during which time" is any better than "during which period". Both phrases are wordy and obtrusive. "When" is much better.
     
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