give a reliable and comfortable impresson....

halmom

Senior Member
korean
I am trying to say that when I meet a stranger for the first time, I want them to think me I am a realiable and comfortable person. and I wonder if make a reliable or comfortable impresson sound natural in English.

I always try to make a reliable and comfortable impresson on me, so I always a business suit and at the same time I always wear a smile.
 
  • sdgraham

    Senior Member
    USA English
    I always try to make a reliable and comfortable impresson on me, so I always a business suit and at the same time I always wear a smile.
    I'm sorry, but you have numerous errors here.

    You make an impression on another person, not on yourself.

    I would not use "reliable and comfortable impression."

    You want to appear reliable. You want the other person to be comfortable with you.

    "at the same time I always" are just wasted words.
     
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