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Can I use the verb ' give" in the following sentence? Also, does the sentence sound ok?

We are most anxious to ensure that we can give our customers maximum satisfaction
 
    • bosun said:
    Can I use the verb ' give" in the following sentence? Also, does the sentence sound ok?

    We are most anxious to ensure that we can give our customers maximum satisfaction
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    Yes, give is correct there. However, in my humble opinion, anxious sounds a bit strong for a business context.

    I would say something like:

    We are proud to ensure that we give maximum satisfaction to our customers.
     
    I agree that "anxious" is not a good word choice. I also think that the sentence is wordy. I'd suggest: "We are eager to give our customers maximum satisfaction." However, you should know that "maximum satisfaction" has become a meaningless cliché in the US.
     
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