give rise to two grades or ?

sugar in the raw

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Mexican spanish
hello!! this part of a letter to a dr. who will evaluate a student´s performance during an intership in his laboratory. I have some doubts with the grammar...
1. The work that the student will develop under your supervision, will be evaluated by you and will give rise to two grades assigned by you, corresponding to the practical courses “Investigación Experimental I” and “Investigación Experimental II” (Experimental Research I and II).
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  • WyomingSue

    Senior Member
    English--USA
    I suggest only these changes: "The work that the student ... supervision [no comma] will be evaluated by you and will [result in] two grades [determined] by you ..."
    Otherwise it is fine.
     
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