Gospel Choir Song | Choir 12th Performance

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Sara Lee

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Chinese
Context:
i want to share with others a choir song on Youtube.
(I want to tell others it is a gospel choir song, and it is the 19th performance by a choir. The topic is praising the Lord. )

You may click the link to view the screenshot:

Screenshot - 2c3e5e6b71e80425c6594fa5b0f045c2 - Gyazo

Here is the video title I wrote:
1. Gospel Choir Song | Choir 12th Performance | Praise the Lord
2. Gospel Choir Song | 12th Performance | Praise the Lord

(ps: Gospel Choir Song and 12th Performance have to be included in the title. They are the keywords, and convey the key information.)

Is the bold part in #1 redundant or awkward?

Which one is better? If neither is okay, please feel free to edit it.
 
  • You little ripper!

    Senior Member
    Australian English
    Praise the Lord! (Song by Gospel Choir - 12th Performance)

    Is it the twelfth time they have performed that song or the twelfth time they have ever performed?
     
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