Context:
i want to share with others a choir song on Youtube.
(I want to tell others it is a gospel choir song, and it is the 19th performance by a choir. The topic is praising the Lord. )
You may click the link to view the screenshot:
Screenshot - 2c3e5e6b71e80425c6594fa5b0f045c2 - Gyazo
Here is the video title I wrote:
1. Gospel Choir Song | Choir 12th Performance | Praise the Lord
2. Gospel Choir Song | 12th Performance | Praise the Lord
(ps: Gospel Choir Song and 12th Performance have to be included in the title. They are the keywords, and convey the key information.)
Is the bold part in #1 redundant or awkward?
Which one is better? If neither is okay, please feel free to edit it.
i want to share with others a choir song on Youtube.
(I want to tell others it is a gospel choir song, and it is the 19th performance by a choir. The topic is praising the Lord. )
You may click the link to view the screenshot:
Screenshot - 2c3e5e6b71e80425c6594fa5b0f045c2 - Gyazo
Here is the video title I wrote:
1. Gospel Choir Song | Choir 12th Performance | Praise the Lord
2. Gospel Choir Song | 12th Performance | Praise the Lord
(ps: Gospel Choir Song and 12th Performance have to be included in the title. They are the keywords, and convey the key information.)
Is the bold part in #1 redundant or awkward?
Which one is better? If neither is okay, please feel free to edit it.