Hank Aaron's record

lightningninja1511

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Having hit more home runs than any other player in the history of baseball, Hank Aaron's record is famous.

We should use "Hank Aaron's record" or "his record" ?
 
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  • Nunty

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    Hebrew-US English (bilingual)
    Hello, lightningninja. :)

    I'm sorry, but we don't answer requests for general correction. What do you think might be the problem with the sentence? Which part of it looks suspicious to you?
     
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