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normantico

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Español - United States
I just wanted to double check if my translation sounds good. Any feedback will be appreciated. Thank you so much to those who are always willing and ready to help!

Having the group conscience allows things to proceed without hard feelings and it also allows everyone's input into the procedure.

Contar con la conciencia de grupo permite que se proceda sin que exista ningún resentimiento; además, esta permite que cada quien aporte sus ideas al procedimiento.

Thank you again, and kind regards to everyone!
 
  • frida-nc

    Senior Member
    English USA
    Hi normantico,
    It seems a bit wordy, though the grammar is very nicely done. I'd shorten to
    ...nos permite seguir sin rencor, y además, admitir las ideas de todos ...

    Native speakers may prefer your subjunctive constructions!
    Cheers.
     
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