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the sentence below was written by me:

According to recent news reports, the company, through its subsidiaries, has been involved in the construction of coal-fired power plants in the Philippines, this way adversely affecting both the local community and the environment.

Does the part in bold sound ok? Is it clear that the company is affecting the locals and the environment by its involvement in the construction?
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