he turned and looked their corcerned faces

edelau

Senior Member
Español (España)
Context: There's a family who had brought their dog to the vet, because it's quite ill.

After several minutes of examination, the vet faced their concerned faces.
After several minutes of examination, the vet turned and looked at their concerned faces.

Are these sentences correct? Is there a better way of saying it?
 
  • Parla

    Member Emeritus
    English - US
    After several minutes of examination, the vet faced their concerned faces.:cross:
    After several minutes of examination, the vet turned and looked at their concerned faces.:tick:
     
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