Heavenly laity

[Tritta]

Hello,

Does anybody have an idea how to translate this in French?

"Father, lift us from this world of goatishness, together as one, and raise us to righteousness and heavenly laity."

My try: "Élève-nous vers la vertu et la laïcité céleste." (although it doesn't seem to make any sense...)

Thanks.

 

[Martyn94]

Some context would help. Is this meant to be serious liturgy, or just taking the mickey?

 

[Tritta]

Supposedly serious liturgy. I am translating a story about a cannibal sect whose members must follow very strict religious rules.

 

[Martyn94]

OK. On that basis, your French seems to achieve about the same level of unintelligibility as the English.

 

[Tritta]

Ok. Thank you for your reply!!