Heavenly Music Through the Breezy Pine

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  • Prairiefire

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    'Breezy Pine' sounds odd to me. For one thing, I think it should be plural. One lonely pine tree, I am guessing, is not the image you want to evoke.

    Second, pines themselves are not breezy. They respond to the breeze, maybe give it some scent, but they don't generate it.

    So I like 'pine breeze;' that makes me think of the pine-scented breeze.

    I also prefer (strictly personal preference) the version without 'appreciating.' The second version gives me a slight sense that I am being TOLD to appreciate it; the first version simply offers the image up for my appreciation.
     

    AngelEyes

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    English - United States
    Heavenly Music Soars Through the Breezy Pines.

    Heavenly Music Soaring Through the Breezy Pines.

    Heavenly Music Singing Through the Breezy Pines.

    Heavenly Music Praying Through the Breezy Pines.




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