heavenly shore, "a" heavenly shore or heavenly shores ?

[lyricsboy]

Hi,

I'm working on song lyrics.
It's about a depressed guy wandering in the streets. He stops by a TV store where he sees the same images on every screen.
It goes like this :

As I get by the TV store
Trying to keep a stiff upper lip

Every screen shows heavenly shore
And a surfer's impossible flip

...

So does one of the following sentences sound right to your english native speaker's ear ?
Every screen shows heavenly shore
Every screen shows "a" heavenly shore
On every screen, "a" heavenly shore
On every screen, the same heavenly shore

Thanks.

 

[owlman5]

Versions 2,3, and 4 all work well. Number one would have to read either "a heavenly shore" or "heavenly shores".

 

[Hermione Golightly]

I agree with the Wise One. Your choice also depends on the rhythm of the music. In speech, my preference is for Every screen shows "a" heavenly shore.

Hermione

 

[lyricsboy]

Thank you so much to the both of you.

In speech, my preference is for Every screen shows "a" heavenly shore.

Great ! That's the better-sounding one when I sing it while playing the chords on my guitar.