Hi,
I'm working on song lyrics.
It's about a depressed guy wandering in the streets. He stops by a TV store where he sees the same images on every screen.
It goes like this :
As I get by the TV store
Trying to keep a stiff upper lip
Every screen shows heavenly shore
And a surfer's impossible flip
...
So does one of the following sentences sound right to your english native speaker's ear ?
Every screen shows heavenly shore
Every screen shows "a" heavenly shore
On every screen, "a" heavenly shore
On every screen, the same heavenly shore
Thanks.
I'm working on song lyrics.
It's about a depressed guy wandering in the streets. He stops by a TV store where he sees the same images on every screen.
It goes like this :
As I get by the TV store
Trying to keep a stiff upper lip
Every screen shows heavenly shore
And a surfer's impossible flip
...
So does one of the following sentences sound right to your english native speaker's ear ?
Every screen shows heavenly shore
Every screen shows "a" heavenly shore
On every screen, "a" heavenly shore
On every screen, the same heavenly shore
Thanks.