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Dr.Appalayya

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India;Telugu
A discussion is attempted hereunder on the strategies to make every class room session the most liked slice of their learning time.

Are those phrases in red letters appropriate?
 
  • Hockey13

    Senior Member
    AmEnglish/German
    A discussion is attempted hereunder on the strategies to make every class room session the most liked slice of their learning time.

    Are those phrases in red letters appropriate?
    I would venture to guess no. The first one sounds like you're fishing for legal jargon and the second one seems like you're trying to chop up a set phrase. Depending on the context, I might say something like this:

    In the following discussion, several strategies for making students really enjoy their class time are weighed.
     
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