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Arzhela

Senior Member
French
Hello,
In my context, two students have been telled that they succeeded in their exam. They hug and laugh, then they push back each other, they seem to be embarrassed and say "Hi".
What could it be in French ? They have been together for some hours yet so they can't say "salut" after all that time !
Thank you for your explanation.
 
  • leonore

    Senior Member
    french/colombian/american
    Hello,
    In my context, two students have been told that they have succeeded in their exam. They hug and laugh, then they push back each other, they seem to be embarrassed and say "Hi".

    (quelques corrections à ta phrase!)

    Je propose d'utiliser quelques onomatopées et effets de ponctuation pour suggérer l'embarras et la contenance/distance qu'essaient de reprendre les étudiants: par exemple:

    "Bon... euh... et au fait, ça va?"
     
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