Housing [ver. 2]

Ume

Banned
Japanese
Hello.

Could you make any changes to the following if you think it's necessary?
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One's home is the foundation of one's life, so one should strive to make it cozy and comfortable. At home, one should be able to be mentally relaxed, and fulfill such physical requirements as eating and sleeping. Having a pleasant chat with the family or growing flowers, for instance, may make one feel satisfied.
 
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