"How does the plot advance by this scene?"

roniy

Senior Member
ISRAEL: Fluent Hebrew ( Speak Russian, Learning English)
"How does the plot advance by this scene?"

How does it sound to you ? is it correct to say that ?
Or you'd rather say :

"How does this scene contribute to the plot ?

THanks.
 
  • Song Sprite

    Senior Member
    English, Canada
    "How does the plot advance by this scene?"
    should be
    "How does this scene advance the plot?"

    Your second example is also correct.
     
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