hurt still remained??

bosun

Banned
korean
I am not sure if the following expression sounds ok to you. If you see any problems, let me have your comments. Thanks.

When I was 7, my dog damaged/or hurt my eyes. Lucily, I did not lose my sight. However, still it affects my eyes and sometime I feel the side effects.
 
  • Dimcl

    Senior Member
    Canadian English
    I am not sure if the following expression sounds ok to you. If you see any problems, let me have your comments. Thanks.

    When I was 7, my dog damaged/or hurt my eyes. Luckily, I did not lose my sight. However, still it affects my eyes and sometime I feel the although I still suffer from side effects.
    Bosun, you don't really have to repeat the fact that your eyes were damaged. Saying that you still suffer from side effects will tell the reader that your eyes are still affected.
     
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