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claude23

Banned
FRANCE
Good afternoon,


am really interested in your job position as sales assistant that's why I am ok to go for an interview anywhere you ask me to. Is it well said ?

Thank you,

Claude.


 
  • It lacks a few things. Try more along the lines of:

    Good Afternoon / Greetings,

    I'm very interested in your / the job position of Sales Assistant. I'm flixible and willing to meet you anywhere for an interview. Regards,
     

    la grive solitaire

    Senior Member
    United States, English
    How about this? It leaves it to the other person to choose the time and place for the interview:

    I am very interested in the position of sales assistant that you are offering and look forward to meeting with you at your convenience.
     

    elroy

    Imperfect Mod
    US English/Palestinian Arabic bilingual
    claude23 said:
    Good afternoon,


    am really interested in your job position as sales assistant that's why I am ok to go for an interview anywhere you ask me to. Is it well said ?

    Thank you,

    Claude.


    I think the structure you are looking for is "to be ok with + -ing":

    I am ok with going for an interview anywhere you ask me to.

    Nevertheless, that's quite informal. My suggestion:

    Because I am very interested in the sales assistant position, I am willing to be interviewed at any venue you suggest.
     

    elroy

    Imperfect Mod
    US English/Palestinian Arabic bilingual
    Oceanrandom said:
    It lacks a few things. Try more along the lines of:

    Good Afternoon / Greetings,

    I'm I am very interested in your / the job position ("job position" is redundant) of sales assistant. I'm I am flexible and willing to meet you anywhere for an interview. Regards,
    Some corrections.
     

    petitsfilous

    Senior Member
    England, english
    Hi,
    I'm a supervisor in a shop so see a lot of letters like this!

    I would write something like...

    I am interested in applying for the position of sales assistant, and am avaliable to meet for an interview at a time and place suitable for you.
     
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