I have spoken to the owner of...

[Jade]

Hi!

Somebody fancy to proof read this?

THANK YOU

Jade


thank you very much for your quick reply.

Unfortunately we do not have any villas for rent at this moment.

I have spoken to the owner of the apartment again and they offered to leave a second double bedroom for your parents. This means that you would rent, in case you decide to take the apartment, 2 double bedrooms and a single bedroom, which is used as ironing room. The rest stays the same. The price difference isn't too much, considering that there will be four instead of two.

The new price is 60 €/night/4person.

I did not tell you that the apartment has a big communal pool, although I am not sure if it will be open in October. I don't know at all about rental of villas with pool, but they might be about double of the price than apartments. The weather in October is nice here in Gandia and you will see people with half sleeve, although nobody would use a pool as the sun isn't strong enough at any time of the day.

Look forward hearing from you

 

[manbaby]

Hello Jade:
I will try.
I spoke to the owner, ( exclude "have" and change "spoken".)
did you mean "lease for "leave" ?
I don't know "at" all about rental.....(exclude "at".)
double "of " the price.....(exclude "of".)
I say "short sleeve" for "half sleeve" ...either one would be correct.

 

[VenusEnvy]

Unfortunately we do not have any villas for rent at this moment.

I have spoken to the owner of the apartment again and he has offered to leave a second double bedroom available for your parents. This means that you would rent (in case you decide to take the apartment) 2 double bedrooms and a single bedroom, which is used as an ironing room. The rest stays the same. The price difference isn't too much, considering that there will be four instead of two.

The new price is 60 €/night for 4 people.

I should let you know that the apartment has a big communal pool, although I am not sure if it will be open in October. I don't know much about the rental of villas with a pool, but they might be about double the price of the apartments. The weather in October is nice here in Gandia and you will see people with short-sleeved shirts, although nobody would use the pool if the sun wasn't strong enough during the day.

I look forward hearing from you.

 

[jacinta]

thank you very much for your quick reply.

Unfortunately we do not have any villas for rent at this moment.

I have spoken to the owner of the apartment again and they offered to leave a second double bedroom for your parents. This means that you would rent, in case you decide to take the apartment, 2 double bedrooms and a single (no need to repeat bedroom), which is used as an ironing room. The rest stays the same. The price difference isn't too much, considering that there will be four instead of two.

The new price is 60 €/night/4person.

Just to let you know, the apartment has a big communal pool, although I am not sure if it will be open in October. I don't know at all about villa rentals with pools, but they might be about double the price of apartments. The weather in October is nice here in Gandia and you will see people with short sleeves, although the pool isn't used much as the temperature isn't really warm enough.
Look forward hearing from you

I made a few changes that sound better to me. Hope this helps.