If for better enforcement of constitution...

Schizophrenic Cat

Senior Member
Turkish
Hello,

If for the better enforcement of constitution, constitutional amendments would be upvoted by most of the parliament members.

I wrote this sentence myself. Does it sound odd ( with the exception of naturality )? Thanks.
 
  • Schizophrenic Cat

    Senior Member
    Turkish
    If ( they are ) for the better enforcement of constitution, constitutional amendments would be upvoted by most of the parliament members.

    My if clause and my independent clause share the same subjet, so I omitted ''they are'' in my dependent sentence. Just like how '' If it is utilised properly, technology itself is not evil.'' can be reduced to '' If utilised properly, technology itself is not evil.''
     
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