''I'm a hot guy who men thinks I'm not but girls think I am.''

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nylg85

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Chinese
''I'm a hot guy who men thinks I'm not but girls think I am.''

Is this sentence correct?

Thank you for correcting me.
 
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    Senior Member
    American English
    Odd, but it can be remedied:

    "I'm a hot guy – men think I'm not, but girls think I am."
    "I'm a hot guy – men don't think so, but girls do."
    (Better)
     
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