In my holidays

nik3

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no sé si escribí bien esto.

In my holidays I moved to Viña del Mar. The travel to last approximately seven hours, and this was exhausting. The travel to start approximately to two of the night.
When I wake up I was hungry then we went to copec and bought a hot dog.
When I arrived and I saw my new house I think that it was so beautiful and big.
Some weeks later my friend Vicente visited my new house in viña del mar, he and my family went to the beach. this holidays were fabulous.


PORFAVOR PORFAVOR-!!
 
  • Tazzler

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    Hola:

    Te lo corrijo, pero hay que colocar textos y preguntas que tratan de inglés en el foro arriba, donde ambos idiomas pueden usarse. Solamente se puede hablar del español en este foro.

    no sé si escribí bien esto.

    In my holidays (Prefiero usar vacation)I moved to Viña del Mar. The trip lasted approximately seven hours, which was exhausting. The travel started approximately at two in the morning.
    When I woke up, I was hungry. Then we went to copec (?) and bought a hot dog.
    When I arrived and I saw my new house, I thought that it was so beautiful and big.
    Some weeks later my friend Vicente visited my new house in Viña del Mar. He and my family went to the beach. This holiday was fabulous.


    PORFAVOR PORFAVOR-!!

    Edit: He cambiado algunas cosa. Mira el texto otra vez. :)
    :)
     
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