in order to help us have its company registered in the" organization

SLAL

Senior Member
FARSI
Hello.

Could you tell me if the following bold part is normal English?

"Winner should submit us the following documents and certificates shortly after the tender in order to help us have its company registered in the organization".

Thanks a lot.
 
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  • boozer

    Senior Member
    Bulgarian
    It is slightly subnormal :) Certain corrections are required, but doing that would amount to proofreading, which is not allowed. To start with, you need a preposition after 'submit'. You may consider 'to' or 'with'... And then, it is not quite clear what organisation you are talking about. Not to mention that your 'winner' is not properly defined (article missing). I am stopping here. :)
     
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