invitación a disfrutar del restaurante

etverito

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español- castellano
hola me gustaria que me revisen este texto, gracias.

Cortésmente quedan invitados a disfrutar de nuestro “Toscana Bar & Restauran” el cual, está abierto desde el 1ro. de Octubre, ubicado en la piscina de su Condominio Stanza Mare. Todos los propietarios tienen un 5% de descuento en alimentos y bebidas.

Venga y disfrute de exquisita comida en el entorno paradisíaco de Punta Cana.

Cordially you are invited to enjoy our Toscana Bar & Restaurant; which is opened since October 1st, located at the Stanza Mare swimming pool. All owners have 5% discount in drinks and foods.

Come and enjoy of this exquisite food in Punta Cana paradise environment.
 
  • charisma_classic

    Senior Member
    English, U.S.A.
    We cordially invite you to enjoy our Toscana Bar & Restaurant, open since October 1st and located at the Stanza Mare swimming pool. All owners receive a 5% discount on food and drinks.

    Come and enjoy exquisite food in the paradise of Punta Cana.

    My only question is about the word "propietarios", as the translation (and original) are a bit unclear to me. What do they own?
     

    charisma_classic

    Senior Member
    English, U.S.A.
    It would be better to call them "residents" if the discount applies to anyone residing in one of the condos. "Owners" sounds a little strange and, while it would probably be OK, could be misinterpreted as owners of the restaurant or pool.
     
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