Hi,
Does this sentence sound natural to you native speakers? And is the fragment after the comma well-constructed? I mean, I'm particularly dubious about the use of the verb in present continuous.
There, under the tune of Blonde’s sassy hit Atomic, and unnoticed by all but Renton, is Diane leaning against a bar and veiled in an air of mystery.
THANKS
Does this sentence sound natural to you native speakers? And is the fragment after the comma well-constructed? I mean, I'm particularly dubious about the use of the verb in present continuous.
There, under the tune of Blonde’s sassy hit Atomic, and unnoticed by all but Renton, is Diane leaning against a bar and veiled in an air of mystery.
THANKS