Is this sentence grammatical?

[Fukuda]

Hello!

I wrote this sentence.

"You may get more return in business if you throw something in for free. People think they are getting a real deal."

Is it grammatical? If it is ungrammatical, what should I fix?

 

[owlman5]

Hello. Do you have a specific question about some part of those sentences, Fukuda?

I'm sorry, but members are not allowed to proofread or edit your sentences or paragraphs. If you ask "Is it grammatical?" in reference to an entire sentence or paragraph, you are asking for proofreading.