... it wouldn't go away. Not for 300 years.

VicNicSor

Banned
Russian
-- But even though she was dead, something in her [her spirit/soul] came back. And this part of her, it wouldn't go away. Not for 300 years!
ParaNorman, animation


"... it wouldn't go away for 300 years!" Does that sound natural to you, as an option? Thank you.
 
  • Juhasz

    Senior Member
    English - United States
    Yes, it's natural. Your version changes the emphasis. In the original, the idea that this part of her wouldn't go away is emphasized, and then the length of time it wouldn't go away for is emphasized. In your version, there's less emphasis on the idea that it wouldn't go away.
     
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