The second bar chart illustrates marital statuses of US citizens in the two years.
The second bar chart illustrates the marital status of US citizens in the two years.
I wrote the sentences above to describe these charts Academic Writing Task 1
I prefer the second sentence. Are both of them grammatically correct and do they sound natural to your ears?
The second bar chart illustrates the marital status of US citizens in the two years.
I wrote the sentences above to describe these charts Academic Writing Task 1
I prefer the second sentence. Are both of them grammatically correct and do they sound natural to your ears?