mass meeting / mass gathering / concentration?

bernar3

Senior Member
Spanish, Spain
Hello,

I would like to know if the term "mass meeting" is normally used here of if it is better to say "concentration". And I would like to know if the style is correct here.

I would like to inform you that the Works committee
has communicated us, with the document attached, the calling
of a mass meeting for all XXX workers at the entrance of the
company, during the break hours 09:30 to 10:00 in order to support
the negotiating table.

Thank you!!
 
  • tepatria

    Senior Member
    Canadian English
    Mass seems redundant here. If you are calling a meeting, there would be a mass of people, hopefully. "...the Works Committee has communicated with us (document attached) calling for a meeting for all workers at the company entrance in order to support the negotiations."
     
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