methodology language, thank you

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anapascualina

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Hello again...:eek:
Could you proof-read this paragraph again? Please:)
Anapascu

All the quotes presented in the chapter 4 are from the women in my research. I chose the quotes because they were typical or illustrative concerning the themes of interest developed for the women during the group discussion and the individual interviews. The major themes identified (from the focus group and interviews/ that?) were those related to lymphedema, hair loss, the role of neighbours as a support group within the village, encountering medicine, and how village life enables women’s agency to resist popular and medical pressure to look feminine.

 
    • anapascualina said:
    Hello again...:eek:
    Could you proof-read this paragraph again? Please:)
    Anapascu

    All the quotes presented in the chapter 4 are from the women in my research. I chose the quotes because they were typical or illustrative concerning the themes of interest developed for the women during the group discussion and the individual interviews. The major themes identified (from the focus group and interviews/ that?) were those related to lymphedema, hair loss, the role of neighbours as a support group within the village, encountering medicine, and how village life enables women’s agency to resist popular and medical pressure to look feminine.
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    All the quotes presentes in chapter four are from the women in my research. I chose the quotes because they were typical or well illustrated concerning the themes of interest developed for the women during the group discussion and individual interviews. The major themes identified (from focus group and interviews) were those related to lyphedema, hair loss, thr role of neighbours as a support group within in the villiage, encountering medicine, and how village life enables women's angency to resist popular pressure to look feminine.
     
    anapascualina said:
    All the quotes presented in the chapter 4 are from the women in my research. I chose these quotes because they were typical or illustrative concerning the themes of interest developed by the women during the group discussion and the individual interviews. The major themes identified (from the focus group and the interviews that?) were those related to lymphedema, hair loss, the role of neighbours as a support group within the village, encountering medicine, and how village life enables women’s agency to resist popular and medical pressure to look feminine.
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    Seems fine to me, with those few suggestions.
     
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